You're like a butterfly
With a clipped wing
You can only fly
With a certain swing
You're like a midnight flower
You need your hour
You're like a rising star
You're free to fall far
Free to fall like a butterfly...
(return to start, repeat)
Late '90s
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This is a well written poem, its easy to understand and the images are very powerful.
ReplyDeleteI just hate the ending. Sorry to criticise, Im only doing so because I feel this is a great poem and maybe the last sentence or two is a bit wishwashy for your poetry.
Overall it very good, I envy your talent Dawn.